Song I previously posted months ago....(acoustic)

I posted this awhile back looking for some ideas on improving it. I've worked on it a lot since then, and I think it's as done as I can get it. Its an acoustic song, some vocals, Rhodes VST, and very minimal amounts of electronic additives.

oh man, i love the sound of those acoustics! crisp and clear. very smooth, almost psychedelic in ways.

Beautiful arrangement as I've come to expect from you --- and while I agree with Sammy that the guitar is crisp and well recorded, I found that the lyrics are for the most part unclear -- I could only understand a few of them. Other than that, a lovely piece.

I just want to say I think this sounds absolutely magnificent. And is a beautiful composition. I would leave it just as it is

Yes, you're right the vocals ARE loud engough but not clear, maybe too much verb on the vox --- not sure of the fix, maybe someone else could suggest something. When you have vox on a bed of reverb sounds, it can be quite tricky. Listened to it again --- lovey composition.

Beautiful, thank you. Only thing would be the "off-key" notes in the ending/outro, in the right can, monosynth?... that may be a matter of taste.